Well done for getting this uploaded Dan. Although I still think you would have been able to discuss representation and target audience more easily if you had included a human figure in your advertisement, I think you evoke an atmosphere and the name altus works with the image. Perhaps you could look at composition again and placing of the bottle - also ... do you think the tag line should be in the same font as the brand name Altus?
Refer to the sheet I gave you last lesson and post your analysis and evaluation asap. The cosmetic unit needs to be completed as we are starting the Preliminary task tomorrow. 600-800 words.
Well done for getting this uploaded Dan. Although I still think you would have been able to discuss representation and target audience more easily if you had included a human figure in your advertisement, I think you evoke an atmosphere and the name altus works with the image. Perhaps you could look at composition again and placing of the bottle - also ... do you think the tag line should be in the same font as the brand name Altus?
ReplyDeleteRefer to the sheet I gave you last lesson and post your analysis and evaluation asap. The cosmetic unit needs to be completed as we are starting the Preliminary task tomorrow. 600-800 words.